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Cheryl’s Garage Victory Lap

by overwhelmed

You're not going to believe what happened last Tuesday, Barb. No, seriously—put down that wine glass and listen to me, because this is good. So you know how Larry and I have been doing that whole pla

20 days ago
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You're not going to believe what happened last Tuesday, Barb. No, seriously—put down that wine glass and listen to me, because this is good.

So you know how Larry and I have been doing that whole playful wrestling thing in the garage? You remember—I told you about the first time I pinned him and he looked at me like he'd just seen a completely different woman? Well, it's evolved since then. Way past evolved. It's become something else entirely.

Let me set the scene for you. Last Tuesday night, Larry came home from his run. He does those six-mile loops through the neighborhood, comes back all sweaty and loose and in that weird post-run mood where he's either ready to eat everything in the fridge or rip my clothes off. That night it was the second one. I could tell by the way he looked at me when he walked through the kitchen door—this half-lidded, hungry look he gets when the endorphins are still buzzing.

I was in the living room, still in my workout clothes from the dojo. Sports bra, those compression shorts that make my legs look ridiculous—in a good way, I mean. My hair was still pulled back tight. I'd been working on my ground game with Marcos, my instructor, for about an hour and a half, and I was feeling that particular kind of strong where you're not even thinking about it. You just feel it. The solidity of your own body.

Larry walked in, toweling sweat off his neck, and said, "You spar tonight?"

"Yeah," I said. "Worked on side control and submissions."

He grinned. "Get anyone to tap?"

"Two guys and a woman who's been doing it for six years."

That made him stop toweling. He just stood there for a second, and I watched his eyes move over me—my shoulders, my arms, the way I was sitting with one foot up on the couch. I could see the wheels turning. That mixture of impressed and intensely turned on that I've come to recognize every time I demonstrate what my body can actually do.

"Want to go a round?" he asked.

That's what he says now. "Go a round." Like it's still playful, still casual. But we both know what it means.

I stood up and stretched, slow and deliberate. Rolled my neck. Cracked my knuckles. I wasn't performing for him—I was warming up. But I knew exactly what it looked like.

"Garage," I said.

Barb, your face is already getting pink. We haven't even gotten to the good part yet.

So we moved the cars out—well, Larry moved his car out, I just stood there and watched him do it, which is its own little power move I've learned. Making him clear the space for what's about to happen. The garage floor is concrete, but we've got those thick foam mats in the corner now. We bought them after the second time, when Larry's elbow got scraped up and he spent three days complaining about it. Four by six feet, interlocking. Enough room for what we need.

He came back in, still in his running shorts and shoes, and I told him to lose the shoes. He kicked them off. I pulled off mine. We stood facing each other on the mats, barefoot, and there was this moment of silence where all I could hear was the hum of the water heater in the corner and our breathing.

"Rules?" he asked.

"My rules," I said. "Same as always. You try to get free. I decide when you're done."

His pupils dilated. I swear to God, every single time I say something like that, I can see it happen. Something shifts behind his eyes.

We squared up. I let him get his hands on me first—he grabbed for my shoulders, standard guy move, trying to control the upper body. I let him think he was setting the grip for about two seconds, then I dropped my level, stepped in, and hit a double-leg takedown that put him flat on his back with me between his legs before he could blink.

He exhaled hard on impact. Not hurt—just surprised, even though he shouldn't be surprised anymore. I've done this to him probably thirty times now. But there's something about the speed of it, the completeness of the control, that catches him off guard every single time.

I moved to side control. If you don't know what that is, Barb—and I'm guessing you don't—it's where I'm lying across his torso, my weight pressing down through my ribs and hips onto his chest, one arm under his neck, the other controlling his far arm. My thigh is up against his side. It's a position that's all pressure and control, and when I do it right, the person on the bottom feels like they're being slowly crushed under a weighted blanket that knows exactly where their breathing is.

I could feel Larry's heartbeat through my ribs. Fast. Really fast. And I could feel something else, too—through the thin fabric of his running shorts, pressing against my thigh. He was already hard.

I leaned down close to his ear and said, "You're not even trying."

"I'm trying," he breathed.

"No, you're not. You're waiting. You like this."

He didn't say anything, but his hips shifted under me, and I felt him press himself against my thigh more deliberately. There it was. The honesty of his body saying what his mouth wouldn't.

I slid my knee across his stomach, transitioning to mount. Full mount—I'm sitting on his lower abdomen, my knees on the mat on either side of his ribs, my hands planted on his chest. From here I can see his whole face, and I watched him look up at me with that expression I know so well now. Part submission, part desperation, part something that looks almost like worship.

"Hands above your head," I told him.

He did it immediately. No hesitation. Both arms stretched out above his head, wrists together. Like he was offering them to me.

I pinned both his wrists with one hand. My grip is strong—stronger than his, something we both know and neither of us says out loud anymore—and I held him there while my other hand slid down his chest. Over his sternum, across his abs, down to the waistband of his shorts.

He made a sound. Not a word, just a low groan that came from somewhere deep in his chest.

"Quiet," I said. "I'll tell you when to make noise."

Barb, I can see you leaning forward. You're not even pretending to be casual about this anymore, are you?

I pulled his shorts down just enough—didn't take them all the way off, just yanked the waistband under his balls so everything was exposed and the fabric was tight underneath, holding him in place. He was fully hard, curved up against his stomach, and I wrapped my hand around him and squeezed. Just held him. Didn't stroke, didn't move. Just held.

His hips bucked. I let him thrust up into my fist twice, then I let go and pressed his hips back down with my weight.

"No," I said. "You don't move unless I let you."

"Cheryl—"

"Shh."

I sat back on his thighs and just looked at him for a moment. His arms were still above his head, even though I'd let go of his wrists. He was keeping them there on his own now. Trained. That's the word that goes through my head when I see it. Trained, and the thought sends a pulse of heat straight through me that I can feel in my clit, insistent and demanding.

I pulled my sports bra off over my head. No ceremony, just grabbed the back collar and yanked it off. My nipples were hard, and the air in the garage was cool enough that I felt it tighten my skin everywhere. Larry's eyes went straight to my chest, and his mouth opened slightly, and his hands started to drift down.

"Did I say you could move your hands?"

They went back up. Immediately.

I leaned forward and pressed my chest against his face. Not gently—I buried his face between my breasts and held the back of his head with one hand, grinding myself against him. I felt his mouth open against my skin, his tongue finding my nipple, and I let him suck for maybe ten seconds before I pulled back and away.

"Not yet," I said. "You haven't earned that."

His breathing was ragged now. Shallow, fast, desperate. I could see the muscles in his arms flexing as he fought the instinct to reach for me, to grab my hips, to take control the way he used to try to in bed before I trained that impulse out of him.

I stood up—just stepped off him, stood up on the mats, looked down at him. He looked wrecked already and I hadn't even taken my shorts off.

"Take off your shorts," I said. "All the way."

He stripped them off. Fast. Kicked them to the side and lay there completely naked on the mat, cock rigid against his stomach, arms still above his head. Waiting.

I peeled my compression shorts down slowly. Not a strip tease—I don't do that performative bullshit—I just took my time because I wanted to watch him watch me. I stepped out of them and stood over him, one foot on either side of his hips. I could feel how wet I was, and it had nothing to do with the workout from the dojo. It was this. The power. The sight of him laid out and waiting for whatever I decided to do next.

"Look at me," I said.

His eyes moved up my body—my thighs, the V of my hips, my stomach, my chest, my face. I could see the want in him, physical and visible, almost painful.

I lowered myself down. Not onto his cock—I straddled his chest again, my knees above his shoulders, and I lowered myself until I was hovering just above his mouth. Close enough that he could feel the heat, smell me.

"You want this?"

"Yes," he said. His voice was hoarse.

"Beg."

His jaw clenched. He's not naturally a begging man, Larry. He's confident, capable, used to being the one in charge in every other part of his life. That's what makes this so good—taking that from him, watching him surrender it piece by piece.

"Please," he said.

"Please what?"

"Please let me taste you. Please, Cheryl."

I lowered myself the last inch. His mouth found me immediately, and I have to tell you, Barb, the sound he made when his tongue hit me—this low, grateful moan that vibrated through my whole body—might be one of my favorite sounds in the world.

He's good at it. He's gotten really good at it, because I've trained him exactly how I like it. Slow at first, broad strokes of his tongue, then more focused when I shift my hips to tell him where I want his mouth. I rode his face in earnest, one hand braced on the top of his head, my thighs squeezing against his ears. I controlled the pace, the pressure, the angle. He was just there for me to use, and the knowledge of that—the physical reality of his mouth working beneath me while his hands stayed pinned above his head—had me close embarrassingly fast.

I pulled away before I came. His face was wet, his eyes glazed, and he actually whimpered when I lifted off him. Whimpered. This grown man, this athletic, strong, capable man, whimpering because I took my pussy away from his mouth.

I slid down his body. His cock was leaking, a clear strand of precum stretched between his stomach and the tip. I grabbed him, positioned him, and sank down in one smooth motion.

He groaned loud—actually loud, which is rare for him—and his hips thrust up hard. I pressed him back down with my weight and my hands on his chest.

"I said you don't move."

"I can't—Cheryl, I can't—"

"You can. And you will. You'll wait until I'm done with you."

I started riding him. Slow, deep strokes, grinding my clit against him on each downstroke. His hands were fists above his head, knuckles white, every muscle in his body strung tight as he fought not to thrust. I could feel him flexing inside me, throbbing, trying to hold back, and I knew he was right on the edge.

"Look at me," I said again.

He opened his eyes. They were barely focused, wild with need.

I sped up. Leaned forward, changed the angle, took him deeper. I could feel my own orgasm building, that tightening that starts in my core and spreads outward, and I let it come. Let it build. Rode him harder.

My climax hit like a breaking wave. I clenched around him so hard I saw stars, my thighs vising his hips as a flood of words poured out of me—his name, raw curses, commands to hold still, hold still, don’t you dare move—while I shuddered and rode it out.

I pulled off him right as the last spasm faded. His cock slipped free, still iron-hard and slick with me, and the noise he made was pure, wrecked protest—a whimper I’d never heard from him before. I gripped him at the base, stroked once, twice, aiming him at his own stomach, and he came in thick, hot pulses across his chest, his abs clenching with each spurt while I murmured, "Good boy. Let it all out."

"Cheryl, please—"

I gathered his release from his chest, the slick, warm evidence of everything I’d pulled from him, and held it up where he could see it glistening between my fingers. Then I brought those fingers to his mouth, pressing them against his lips—not asking, just waiting. He turned his face away, jaw tight with some last scrap of defiance, so I grabbed his chin and forced his head back, thumb and forefinger digging into the hinges of his jaw until his mouth opened. He tried to jerk free, muscles bunching, a real struggle now—he bucked and twisted, nearly unseating me—but I locked my thighs around his ribs and held him down, my weight pinning his hips while he fought. His breath came in harsh grunts, his eyes blazing up at me, and I just waited, fingers still poised at his lips, letting him exhaust himself against my grip. The fight bled out of him in stages—first his shoulders sagged, then his fists uncurled, and finally his gaze broke, dropping away as his lips parted on a shaky surrender. When I slid my fingers past them, he sucked them clean with a groan that vibrated straight through me, his whole body going slack in one long, shuddering wave. I let him work until he was trembling from the overstimulation, then withdrew my hand and settled back on my heels between his sprawled thighs. He lay there wrecked, chest heaving, streaked with his own spend, staring at the ceiling like I’d dismantled something fundamental in him and hadn’t quite bothered to put it back the same way.

"That," he gasped, chest still laboring for air, "was the best one yet."

I didn't answer right away, still riding the high of it, the ache in my thighs and the slick heat between them demanding more. I looked down at his wrecked, trusting face and felt that familiar surge—pure, greedy need. Without a word, I crawled up his body, knees bracketing his ears, and lowered myself onto his mouth. He made a muffled, desperate sound against me, his stubble scraping my inner thighs as his tongue found me, clumsy with exhaustion but eager, so fucking eager. I gripped the headboard and rocked into him, chasing my own release while he lay pinned and gasping beneath me, and when I came it was with a sharp cry that left my legs shaking and his chin glistening. I stayed there for a long moment, catching my breath, feeling the last tremors roll through me before I finally swung off him and collapsed onto the mattress.

I just smiled.

Okay, Barb. You haven't said a word in about ten minutes. Your face is the color of a tomato and you're gripping your wine glass so hard I'm afraid it's going to shatter.

"So..." Barb finally said. She set the glass down, swallowed, and looked at me with an intensity I'd never seen from her before. "You just... told him what to do. And he did it."

"Every time."

"And he likes it? He actually likes it?"

"He loves it. He comes harder when I'm in complete control than he ever did when we were just doing the regular stuff. It's not even close."

Barb was quiet for a long moment. Then she leaned forward. "Could someone... I mean, could you teach someone to do that? Someone who isn't a martial artist?"

I studied her face. The blush was still there, but it wasn't embarrassment anymore. It was something else. Hunger. Curiosity. A door opening that she hadn't known was there.

"Barb, you don't need to bench two hundred pounds to dominate a man. That's not what it's about. It's about deciding that you're in charge and then acting like it. The strength helps, sure, but the thing that breaks them—the thing that makes them put their hands above their head without being told—it's the certainty. It's knowing you run the show."

"So what would I even... how would I start?"

I grinned. "Next Friday. My house. Larry can be the practice dummy."

"You're serious."

"Dead serious. I'll walk you through the basics. Some positioning, some verbal control, a few holds that don't require any strength at all—just leverage and confidence."

Barb picked her wine glass back up, took a long sip, and set it down with a decisive click. "Okay. But I have a condition."

"What?"

"If I'm doing this, I want to go further than what you just described. I want the full playbook. I want to know about the bondage, the edging, everything. If I'm going to dominate a man, I want to do it right."

I laughed. "Deal. But Barb? You should know—once you feel that kind of power, once you see that look in a man's eyes when he realizes you own him completely... you don't go back. You don't want to go back."

She looked at me, and I recognized something in her expression because I'd seen it in my own mirror. That flicker of something predatory waking up.

"Good," she said. "I don't want to go back."

We clinked glasses, and I thought to myself: Larry's in for an interesting Friday.