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Max slumped onto the couch with a dramatic sigh, his arm draped over his eyes like a tragic hero in a soap opera. "I'm a broken man," he declared, voice muffled by his forearm. "My heart is shattered,

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Max slumped onto the couch with a dramatic sigh, his arm draped over his eyes like a tragic hero in a soap opera. "I'm a broken man," he declared, voice muffled by his forearm. "My heart is shattered, my soul is crushed. Kaylee, you monster, how could you leave me behind for the Queens of the Stone Age?"

Kaylee, already halfway through pulling on her boots, glanced up with a smirk. "Oh, come on, Max. It's just one night. You'll live. Besides," she added, waggling her eyebrows, "you've got the house to yourself. Maybe you'll find a way to pass the time."

Max peeked out from under his arm, grinning. "You mean like a nice, relaxing evening with my favorite porn and a six-pack of beer?"

Kaylee laughed, tossing a throw pillow at his head. "Smartass. But seriously, if you're going to be alone, you could always invite Raven over. She owes me a movie night anyway."

Max sat up straight, his eyes widening with feigned innocence. "Raven? Your little sister? The one who blushes every time I walk into a room?"

Kaylee rolled her eyes. "Don’t act so innocent. I’ve seen the way you look at her. And honestly, after the way she’s been staring at your ass lately, I think she might be ready to do more than just stare."

Before Max could respond, Raven herself walked into the room, her cheeks already flushed pink. She froze when she saw Max sitting on the couch, her eyes darting between him and Kaylee. "Uh, hey. I was just gonna grab a snack. You guys need anything?"

Kaylee, ever the instigator, grinned like a cat who’d just cornered a mouse. "Actually, Raven, we were just talking about you. Max here was saying how he’s been admiring your, uh, *assets*."

Max groaned, rubbing his temples. "Kaylee, what the fuck? I never said that."

Raven’s blush deepened, but she didn’t look away. Instead, she crossed her arms, her fingers tapping against her bicep. "Well, if you *had* said it, I’d say you were full of shit. But since you’re not saying it, I guess I’ll just… go get my snack."

Kaylee, not about to let this opportunity slip away, jumped in. "Wait. How about this—Max, you’ve got the house to yourself tonight. Raven, you were gonna cancel your movie night anyway. Why don’t you two just… hang out? No pressure, no expectations. Just two consenting adults enjoying each other’s company."

Max’s mouth dropped open. "Kaylee, are you serious right now?"

Kaylee shrugged, trying to play it cool. "I’m serious. But only if you both want to. No hard feelings if you don’t."

Raven bit her lip, her gaze flicking to Max. He was staring at her, his usual easygoing demeanor replaced by something hungrier. Something that made her stomach flip. "I… I mean, if you want to," she stammered.

Max didn’t hesitate. He stood up, crossing the room in two strides, and took Raven’s hand. "Fuck yes, I want to."

Raven’s breath hitched as Max pulled her close, his other hand sliding around her waist. Kaylee watched, amused, as her sister melted into Max’s touch. "Alright, kids, have fun. But no walking in on each other, got it? This is *your* thing, not mine."

With that, Kaylee grabbed her bag and sauntered out the door, leaving Max and Raven alone.

The moment the door clicked shut, Max turned to Raven, his hands already exploring the curves of her body. "You sure about this?" he murmured against her lips.

Raven nodded, her fingers tangling in his hair. "I wanna make it wit chu."

"Timely" he said. "Shit slaps."

Max didn’t need any more encouragement. He kissed her hard, his tongue sweeping into her mouth as he backed her against the wall. Raven moaned into the kiss, her hands gripping his shoulders as he ground his hips against hers. She could feel how hard he was already, and it sent a shiver down her spine.

Max broke the kiss, his breath ragged. "Bedroom. Now. Clothes gone."

Raven didn’t argue. She let him lead her down the hall, her heart pounding in her chest. The moment they crossed the threshold into her room, Max spun her around and pushed her onto the bed. Raven landed with a gasp, her legs spreading instinctively as Max crawled between them.

He didn’t waste any time. His hands slid up her thighs, pushing her skirt up around her waist as he buried his face between her legs. Raven cried out as his tongue found her clit, swirling in slow, torturous circles. She was already wet, her arousal dripping down her thighs, and Max lapped it up greedily, his groans vibrating against her sensitive flesh.

"Oh fuck, Max," Raven panted, her fingers tangling in his hair as she arched her back. "Don’t stop."

Max didn’t plan to. He flattened his tongue, pressing it against her entrance before dragging it up to her clit again. Raven’s hips jerked off the bed, her thighs trembling as pleasure coiled tight in her belly. She was close, so close, but Max pulled back just enough to tease her.

"Please," she begged, her voice raw.

Max smirked up at her, his lips glistening with her arousal. "Please what?"

"Please make me come," she whimpered.

Max didn’t need to be told twice. He buried his face between her legs again, his tongue working her clit in quick, sharp flicks. Raven’s legs shook as the orgasm crashed over her, her back arching off the bed as she screamed his name. Max held her down, his hands gripping her thighs as he licked her through the waves of pleasure, drawing out every last shudder.

When Raven finally collapsed back onto the bed, her body limp and sated, Max crawled up her body, his cock leaving a trail of precum on her skin. Raven’s eyes fluttered open, her gaze locking onto his as he positioned himself at her entrance.

"Fuck me, Max," she whispered.

Max didn’t hesitate. He thrust into her in one smooth motion, burying himself to the hilt. Raven gasped, her nails digging into his back as he filled her completely. He started slow, pulling back before sinking into her again, each thrust drawing a moan from her lips.

But Raven wasn’t content with slow. She wrapped her legs around his waist and rolled them over, pinning him beneath her. Max groaned as her tight heat swallowed him whole, her hips rolling in slow, deliberate circles.

"Fuck, Raven," he growled, his hands gripping her ass as she rode him. "You feel incredible."

Raven bit her lip, her own pleasure mounting as she picked up the pace. She leaned forward, her hands pressing against his chest as she bounced on his cock, each thrust sending a jolt of pleasure through her. Max’s hands slid up to her breasts, his thumbs circling her nipples as she rode him harder.

Max’s breath hitched, his hips jerking up to meet her thrusts. "I’m gonna come," he warned, his voice rough with need.

Raven didn’t stop. She rode him harder, her own orgasm building as his cock swelled inside her. "Come for me, Max," she gasped. "I want to feel you."

Max groaned, his back arching as his release tore through him. Raven cried out as she felt him pulse inside her, his cum filling her in hot, thick spurts. She collapsed onto his chest, her breath coming in ragged gasps as the last waves of her own orgasm faded.

Max wrapped his arms around her, his chest heaving as he tried to catch his breath. "Fuck," he muttered against her hair. "That was…"

Raven let out a shaky laugh, nuzzling into his neck. "Yeah. It was."

---

Max woke up to the sound of running water. He blinked, disoriented, before remembering where he was—and who he was with. Raven was still asleep beside him, her chest rising and falling in slow, even breaths. He smiled, brushing a strand of hair away from her face before slipping out of bed.

The bathroom door was slightly ajar, steam drifting out into the hallway. Max pushed it open, his cock already half-hard at the sight of Raven’s shampoo and body wash scattered around the tub. She’d left the water running, the jets churning the water into a frothy mess.

Max stepped into the shower, the hot water sluicing over his skin as he grabbed a loofah and Raven’s body wash. He lathered it up, his hands gliding over his chest and arms before moving lower. His cock twitched as he soaped himself up, his mind drifting back to last night—and the way Raven had ridden him like she owned him.

He was about to wrap his hand around his shaft when the shower curtain rustled. Raven stepped in, her hair piled on top of her head in a messy bun, her body slick with water. Her eyes locked onto his cock, her lips parting slightly.

"Need some help with that?" she asked, her voice husky.

Max grinned, stepping closer. "I was just admiring the view."

Raven rolled her eyes but stepped under the spray with him, her hands sliding over his chest as she took the loofah from him. "Turn around," she ordered.

Max obeyed, his breath hitching as her hands slid down his back, the rough texture of the loofah sending shivers down his spine. Raven washed him thoroughly, her fingers teasing his ass before moving lower to cup his balls.

"Fuck, Raven," Max groaned, his cock throbbing in her grip.

She chuckled, her breath hot against his ear. "You like that?"

Max didn’t answer. He turned around, his hands gripping her waist as he backed her against the shower wall. Raven gasped as he lifted her up, her legs wrapping around his waist as he lined himself up with her entrance.

"Condom," she panted, her nails digging into his shoulders.

Max groaned but set her down long enough to grab a condom from the shelf. He rolled it on in record time, then lifted her again, his cock sliding into her with one smooth thrust.

Raven cried out, her head thumping against the tile as Max fucked her against the shower wall. The water rained down on them, slicking their skin as their bodies moved in sync. Max’s hands gripped her ass, her fingers tangling in his hair as he pounded into her.

"Harder," Raven begged, her voice raw. "Fuck me harder."

Max growled, his hips snapping against hers as he drove into her with punishing force. Raven’s moans filled the shower, her body trembling as another orgasm built inside her. Max could feel her walls fluttering around him, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps.

"Come for me, baby," he growled, his teeth grazing her neck. "Come all over my cock."

Raven screamed as her orgasm tore through her, her nails raking down his back as she came. Max followed right after, his release spilling into the condom as he buried himself to the hilt. He held her there, his chest heaving as they both came down from the high.

Raven let out a shaky laugh, her forehead resting against his. "We’re gonna need another shower after this."

Max chuckled, nuzzling into her neck. "Worth it."

---

After the shower, they dried off and padded back to the bedroom, where Raven’s robe was draped over the chair. Max pulled on his boxers while Raven slipped into one of his old t-shirts, the fabric swallowing her small frame.

They ended up in the backyard, where the jacuzzi was already bubbling away, the warm water beckoning. Max flicked on the lights, casting the patio in a soft, golden glow. Raven sank into the water with a sigh, her muscles relaxing as the jets massaged her sore body.

Max followed, settling in across from her with a groan. "Fuck, that’s nice."

Raven smirked. "Told you we should’ve come out here first."

Max laughed, his foot brushing against hers under the water. "Next time."

Raven’s smirk turned sly. "Oh, so there’s gonna be a next time?"

Max leaned forward, his elbows on his knees. "You complaining?"

Raven shook her head, her fingers trailing through the water. "Nope. Just making sure you’re aware of the consequences."

Max grinned. "Oh, I’m well aware."

Raven’s foot slid up his calf, her toes teasing the inside of his thigh. "Good. Because I’m not done with you yet."

Max’s cock twitched at the promise in her voice. He reached out, his hand gripping her ankle before dragging her closer. Raven gasped as he pulled her into his lap, her legs straddling his waist as she settled onto his cock.

"Fuck," Max groaned, his hands gripping her hips as she rolled her own in slow, torturous circles. "You’re gonna kill me."

Raven leaned forward, her lips brushing his ear. "That’s the idea."

Max’s hands slid up her back, his fingers tangling in her hair as he pulled her into a deep kiss. Raven moaned into his mouth, her hips moving faster as she rode him in the warm, bubbling water. The jets added to the sensation, the water sloshing around them as their bodies moved in perfect sync.

Max’s hands slid down to her ass, his fingers digging into the soft flesh as he helped her ride him. Raven’s moans grew louder, her nails scratching down his back as her orgasm built. Max could feel her walls fluttering around him, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps.

"Come for me," he growled against her lips. "I want to feel you come all over my cock."

Raven screamed as her orgasm tore through her, her back arching as she came. Max followed right after, his release spilling into the condom as he buried himself to the hilt. He held her there, his chest heaving as they both came down from the high.

Raven collapsed against his chest, her breath coming in ragged gasps. "Holy shit," she whispered.

Max chuckled, nuzzling into her hair. "Yeah. Holy shit."

---

Later, after they’d dried off and collapsed onto the couch, Raven traced idle patterns on Max’s chest as he played with her hair. The room was quiet except for the hum of the TV in the background, some late-night comedy playing on low.

Max broke the silence first. "So… anal."

Raven stiffened slightly, her fingers stilling. "What about it?"

Max propped himself up on his elbow, studying her face. "You said you’ve done it before."

Raven shrugged, avoiding his gaze. "Yeah. A few times."

Max raised an eyebrow. "A few times? Or… once?"

Raven’s cheeks pinked, but she met his gaze. "Once. But it was a long time ago."

Max grinned. "So you’re telling me you’re a virgin back there?"

Raven swatted his chest, laughing. "Shut up. It was just… one guy, one time, and it wasn’t exactly pleasant."

Max’s grin turned wicked. "So you’re saying you need a proper introduction?"

Raven’s breath hitched, her eyes widening. "Max…"

He leaned in, his lips brushing her ear. "I’m up for the job."

Raven swallowed hard, her fingers gripping his shirt. "Kaylee said we could have another pass."

Max’s cock twitched at the thought. "Then we’ll make it count."

Raven let out a shaky laugh, her body already heating at the promise in his voice. "You’re insatiable."

Max kissed her, slow and deep. "Only for you."

And with that, Raven knew—this wasn’t going to be the last of them.