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Lafayette Afternoons

by iris1117
about 3 hours ago
long readintense intensity
The hotel room smelled like Hugo’s cologne and the faint chemical sweetness of air freshener, a combination that usually made me feel like I was on vacation but today just made me feel trapped. I’d been lying on the king bed in my underwear for an hour, scrolling my phone, watching the Louisiana sun creep across the ceiling. Hugo had left at seven that morning, all crisp white shirt and polished shoes, kissing my forehead and promising he’d be back by five. Five. That was six hours away, and my body was already humming with a restless, achy need that had nothing to do with the heat outside.

I’d tried everything. A cold shower. A nap. Even one of those terrible hotel yoga videos on YouTube where the woman whispered like she was trying to seduce a fern. Nothing worked. My skin felt electric, my nipples hard against the lace of my bra, and between my legs there was a slow, insistent throb that refused to be ignored. Hugo was a good boyfriend. Attentive, caring, always asking if I needed anything. But he was also a wine salesman who spent more nights in rental cars than in our bed, and when he was gone, my body didn’t care about his sweet texts or his thoughtful little gifts. My body wanted to be fucked.

I opened the hookup app almost without thinking. Hugo had encouraged me to use it months ago, after one of our long, wine-soaked conversations about what we each needed. He’d said something about how he wanted me to be satisfied, how he hated the thought of me lying in bed frustrated while he was on the road. I’d laughed then, called him a pervert, and then downloaded it the next morning. Now I swiped through a few faces, my thumb moving with practiced speed, until I stopped on one that made my breath catch.

Jackson. Twenty-nine, according to his profile. Muscular, with a jawline that looked like it had been carved from oak and a smirk in his photo that said he knew exactly what he was doing. His bio was short: *Lafayette born and raised. I don’t brag. I prove.* I felt a hot little pulse between my legs. I typed a message before I could talk myself out of it.

“My boyfriend’s at work until five. I’m at the Magnolia Court Hotel. Room 412. How fast can you be here?”

His reply came in under a minute. “Give me twenty. I work down the street. Don’t start without me.”

I tossed the phone onto the bed and stood up, pacing the room in my bra and panties. My reflection in the mirror across from the bed showed a woman with long wavy blonde hair, flushed cheeks, and breasts that were practically spilling out of the lace cups. I looked like I was already halfway to an orgasm, and honestly, I felt like it too. I thought about changing into something sexier, but then I decided I didn’t want to wait. Jackson was coming to fuck me, not to judge my underwear.

The knock came nineteen minutes later. I opened the door and there he was, even better than his photo. Tall, broad-shouldered, wearing a tight gray t-shirt that stretched across his chest and arms. He had a duffel bag slung over one shoulder and a grin that made my knees feel weak.

“Iris,” he said, and his voice was deep and slow, like honey poured over gravel.

“Jackson,” I said, and stepped back to let him in.

He closed the door behind him and locked it, then turned to look at me. His eyes moved down my body, lingering on my breasts, my hips, the damp spot already forming on my panties. He didn’t say anything for a long moment, just looked, and I felt myself getting wetter under his gaze.

“You weren’t lying about being ready,” he said finally.

“I’ve been ready all day.”

He dropped the duffel bag on the floor and crossed the room to me in three long strides. His hands found my waist, rough and warm, and he pulled me against him. I could feel the hard length of his cock through his jeans, pressing against my stomach, and I let out a shaky breath.

“Here’s how this works,” he said, his mouth close to my ear. “I’m in charge. You do what I say, and I’ll make you come so many times you forget your own name. Understand?”

I nodded, my throat dry.

“Say it.”

“I understand.”

He kissed me then, hard and demanding, his tongue pushing into my mouth while his hands slid up to cup my breasts. He squeezed them through the lace, his thumbs finding my nipples and rolling them until I moaned against his lips. Then he pulled back and tugged my bra down, freeing my tits, and bent his head to take one nipple into his mouth. His tongue was hot and wet, flicking and sucking, while his other hand worked my other breast. I grabbed the back of his head and held him there, my hips grinding against his thigh.

“Fuck, Jackson,” I gasped.

He pulled off my nipple with a wet pop and straightened up. “On your knees.”

I dropped to the floor without hesitation. He unbuttoned his jeans and pushed them down along with his boxers, and his cock sprang free. It was huge. Thick and long, with a heavy vein running along the underside and a head that was already slick with pre-cum. I wrapped my hand around it and felt the heat of him, the weight of him, and I couldn’t help the little whimper that escaped my lips.

“Suck it,” he said.

I leaned forward and took him into my mouth, stretching my lips around his girth. He tasted salty and masculine, and I moaned as I worked my tongue along the underside of his shaft. He grabbed a fistful of my hair and started to guide my head, not gently, pushing himself deeper until he hit the back of my throat. I gagged a little, but he held me there, and the feeling of being used like that only made me wetter.

“That’s it,” he grunted. “Take all of it.”

I hollowed my cheeks and sucked harder, bobbing my head, using my hand to stroke the part of him I couldn’t fit in my mouth. He was thick enough that my jaw ached, but I didn’t care. I wanted him to fuck my throat, wanted him to use me until I couldn’t think straight.

After a few minutes, he pulled me off his cock and hauled me to my feet. He spun me around and bent me over the edge of the bed, then yanked my panties down to my ankles. I heard him spit, and then his fingers were on my pussy, spreading my wetness around, sliding two fingers inside me without warning. I cried out and pushed back against his hand.

“You’re so fucking wet,” he said. “You needed this bad, didn’t you?”

“Yes,” I moaned. “Please, Jackson, fuck me.”

He positioned himself behind me and rubbed the head of his cock against my clit, making me shiver. Then he pushed inside, and I screamed. He was so big, stretching me in a way that bordered on painful, and I had to grip the sheets to keep from collapsing. He didn’t give me time to adjust. He started thrusting immediately, hard and deep, his hips slapping against my ass with each stroke.

“Oh my God,” I gasped. “Oh fuck, oh fuck.”

“You like that?” he growled. “You like being fucked by a real man while your boyfriend’s out selling wine?”

I couldn’t form words. He was pounding into me, hitting spots I didn’t know I had, and I could feel an orgasm building low in my belly. He reached around and found my clit with his fingers, rubbing it in tight circles while he fucked me, and that was all it took. I came hard, my whole body convulsing, my pussy clenching around his cock as waves of pleasure crashed through me.

He didn’t stop. He kept fucking me through my orgasm, slowing down just enough to let me catch my breath, then picking up speed again. He pulled out and flipped me onto my back, pushing my legs up over his shoulders, and slid back inside me. This angle was even deeper, and I could see his face now, the way his jaw was clenched, the sweat beading on his forehead.

“Look at me,” he said. “I want you to watch me while I make you come again.”

I locked eyes with him as he drove into me, and the intensity of it, the way he was looking at me like he owned me, pushed me over the edge again. I came with a strangled cry, my nails digging into his arms, my body shaking uncontrollably.

He pulled out and stroked his cock, his eyes still on mine. “Turn over. Ass up.”

I rolled onto my stomach and got on my knees, presenting myself to him. He grabbed my hips and entered me again, slower this time, savoring it. His hands roamed over my ass, squeezing and slapping lightly, and I moaned into the mattress. He fucked me like that for a long time, building me up again, until I was begging him to let me come.

“Please, Jackson, please, I need it.”

“Not yet,” he said. “You come when I tell you to.”

He reached around and rubbed my clit again, and I bit the pillow to keep from screaming. My whole body was on fire, every nerve ending alive, and I could feel myself teetering on the edge. He must have felt it too, because he leaned over me and whispered in my ear.

“Now.”

I shattered. The orgasm ripped through me, stronger than the first two, and I screamed into the pillow as my pussy spasmed around his cock. He fucked me through it, his thrusts becoming erratic, and then he pulled out and came on my lower back, hot ropes of cum painting my skin.

We collapsed onto the bed together, breathing hard. I could feel his cum cooling on my back, and my legs were still trembling. He rolled onto his side and looked at me, that smirk back on his face.

“Told you I don’t brag,” he said.

I laughed weakly. “You weren’t lying.”

We lay there for a while, and then he fucked me again, slower this time, more tender, but no less intense. By the time he left, I had lost count of my orgasms. My body felt used and satisfied in a way it hadn’t in years.

I showered, got dressed, and met Hugo at the restaurant down the street. He was already at the table, sipping a glass of red wine, and he smiled when he saw me.

“How was your day?” he asked.

I sat down across from him and took a sip of his wine. “Interesting,” I said. “I met someone.”

His eyebrows went up. “Oh?”

“His name is Jackson. He works near the hotel. I found him on the app, and he came over this afternoon.”

Hugo set his glass down slowly. “Tell me.”

So I did. I told him everything. How Jackson had walked into the room and taken control, how he’d bent me over the bed and fucked me until I screamed, how his cock was so big I could barely take it, how he’d made me come over and over again. I didn’t leave out any details, and as I talked, I watched Hugo’s face change. His eyes got dark, his breathing quickened, and I could see the bulge forming in his slacks under the table.

“He was amazing,” I said. “The best I’ve ever had. I want to see him again next time we’re in town.”

Hugo reached across the table and grabbed my hand. “We’re going back to the hotel. Now.”

He practically dragged me out of the restaurant. The whole drive back, his hand was on my thigh, squeezing, and by the time we got to the room, he was already unbuttoning his shirt. He pushed me onto the bed and kissed me hard, his beard scratching against my face, and I could feel his cock pressing against me.

“I can’t believe you let another man fuck you,” he said, his voice rough.

“I can’t believe you’re so turned on by it,” I replied.

He pulled my dress up and yanked my panties aside, then thrust into me without preamble. I gasped and wrapped my legs around him, pulling him deeper. He fucked me with a desperate, almost frantic energy, like he was trying to prove something, and I let him. I moaned and arched my back and told him how good it felt, but in the back of my mind, I was comparing him to Jackson. Hugo was good. He was attentive and passionate and he knew my body. But Jackson had been something else entirely.

After Hugo came, collapsing on top of me, I ran my fingers through his hair and whispered, “That was nice, baby.”

He lifted his head and looked at me. “Nice?”

I smiled. “You don’t even come close to satisfying me like Jackson did with his humongous cock.”

He stared at me for a second, and then he laughed, a deep, genuine laugh that shook his whole body. “You’re unbelievable,” he said.

“You love it,” I said.

He kissed me again, softer this time. “I do. And I love that you’re not afraid to tell me the truth.”

We lay there in the dark, tangled together, and I thought about Jackson, about the way he’d made me feel, and I smiled. Lafayette had turned out to be a very good trip after all.