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The elevator doors slid open with a pneumatic hiss, and Marty Supreme stepped into the marble foyer of Belmont’s penthouse like he owned the place. He didn’t, of course. His sneakers had a hole in the

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The elevator doors slid open with a pneumatic hiss, and Marty Supreme stepped into the marble foyer of Belmont’s penthouse like he owned the place. He didn’t, of course. His sneakers had a hole in the left toe and his bank account had seventeen dollars in it, but that had never stopped him before. The party was in full swing—some jazz quartet playing in the corner, waiters circulating with champagne flutes, women in dresses that cost more than Marty’s entire wardrobe. He grabbed a glass off a passing tray and downed it in one gulp, scanning the crowd.

Belmont wasn’t among them. No surprise there. The old bastard liked to hold court in private, away from the noise, where he could pull strings without anyone noticing. Marty had been in that study once before, back when he was Belmont’s golden boy, the ping pong prodigy with the cocky grin and the unstoppable backhand. That was before the fallout. Before Belmont had asked him to tank a match and Marty had laughed in his face.

Now he needed the son of a bitch.

The world championships were in Tokyo. Tomorrow. Marty had qualified through sheer fucking brilliance, fighting his way up through the rankings with nothing but a borrowed paddle and raw talent. But talent didn’t buy plane tickets. He’d maxed out every favor, every couch he could crash on, every sponsor who might take a chance. No one wanted to touch him. Belmont had seen to that.

He found the study door slightly ajar, voices drifting out. Marty pushed it open without knocking.

The room was all dark wood and leather, bookshelves stretching to the ceiling, a fireplace crackling despite the mild weather outside. Belmont sat in a high-backed chair near the window, a crystal tumbler of something amber in his hand. Three other men occupied the sofas nearby—business associates, from the look of them, expensive suits and watchful eyes. They all turned when Marty walked in.

Belmont didn’t look surprised. He never did. At fifty-eight, he had the kind of face that had seen every angle, every hustle, every desperate plea. Silver hair cropped close, a jaw like a cliff face, eyes that could freeze water.

“Marty Supreme,” he said, voice smooth as the whiskey he was drinking. “Didn’t expect to see you here. Thought you’d be on a plane by now.”

“Funny thing about planes,” Marty said, forcing his usual swagger. “They want money.”

“Ah.” Belmont took a sip. “And you have none.”

“I need a sponsor. One trip. That’s all.”

Belmont set his glass down on the side table with a deliberate click. The other men watched in silence, their expressions ranging from amusement to something harder to read.

“You had a sponsor,” Belmont said. “You had a very generous arrangement. Then you decided to embarrass me in front of some very important people.”

“I don’t throw matches.”

“No, you don’t.” Belmont’s smile was thin as a razor blade. “You have principles. Admirable. Expensive, but admirable.”

Marty took a step closer. His heart was hammering but he kept his face loose, confident. “Look, I know we had our differences. But this is the world championship. I win this, I’m set. I can pay you back triple whatever you put in.”

“I don’t need money, Marty. I have money.” Belmont leaned back, studying him. “What I need is satisfaction.”

The room felt suddenly smaller. One of the associates chuckled low in his throat.

“I’ll do anything,” Marty said.

The words hung in the air. Belmont’s eyebrows rose a fraction of an inch.

“Anything is a big word.”

“I mean it.”

Belmont tapped his fingers on the arm of the chair, a slow rhythm. Then he pointed toward a side door. “There’s a paddle in the next room. One of my old competition paddles, actually. Signed by the Swedish national team. Fetch it for me.”

Marty frowned but didn’t argue. He crossed the room, pushed through the door, and found himself in a smaller office. The paddle was mounted on the wall in a glass case. He popped the latch, took it down. The wood was smooth and worn, the rubber long since hardened. A collector’s item, not a player’s tool.

When he came back, Belmont was standing. The three associates had shifted in their seats, their attention sharpened.

“You remember what I told you last year?” Belmont asked, taking the paddle from Marty’s hand. “When you threw my money back in my face?”

“I didn’t throw your money—”

“You said no to me. Publicly. You made me look weak.” Belmont slapped the paddle lightly against his own palm, testing the weight. “I told you then that you’d regret it. That one day you’d come crawling back, and when you did, I’d make sure you learned some respect.”

Marty’s stomach dropped. He could see where this was going, and it wasn’t anywhere good.

“You’ve been a bad boy, Marty. Bad boys get punished.”

“You’re kidding.”

“Do I look like I’m kidding?” Belmont gestured at the leather sofa behind Marty. “Fifty strokes. Bare ass. Right here, right now. You take them all, I fund your trip. First class. Full expenses.”

Marty’s face went hot. The associates were grinning now, settling in like they were about to watch a particularly good show.

“Fuck that,” Marty said.

“Then leave.” Belmont shrugged. “Enjoy watching the championships from your couch. Oh wait—you don’t have a couch, do you? You’ve been sleeping on floors, I hear.”

Marty’s jaw clenched so hard his teeth ached. Tokyo. The arena. The tables. The crowd. He’d worked his whole life for this. Every shitty basement tournament, every cheap motel, every meal he’d skipped to afford entry fees. This was his shot. His only shot.

“Fifty strokes and the trip is fully funded,” he said, voice tight. “You swear it?”

“I swear it.”

“And if I can’t take fifty?”

Belmont’s smile widened. “Then you take something else. My cock, to be precise. Bent over this sofa, no lube, no condom. And the trip still gets funded, so either way you win.” He paused. “Well. I win.”

The associates laughed outright now. Marty felt sick. But he also felt the weight of his dream pressing against his ribs, and he knew he wasn’t walking out that door.

“Fine,” he said. “But I’m taking the fifty. You’re not getting anywhere near my ass.”

“We’ll see.” Belmont pointed at the sofa. “Pants down. Bend over.”

Marty’s hands were shaking as he unbuckled his belt. He told himself it didn’t matter. He’d taken beatings before—not like this, not deliberate and humiliating, but he’d played through injuries, through exhaustion, through pain that would make most people quit. Fifty strokes with a ping pong paddle. How bad could it be?

He shoved his jeans and boxers down to his ankles and bent over the arm of the sofa, gripping the leather cushion. The room was warm but his exposed skin prickled with goosebumps. He could feel their eyes on him—Belmont’s cold assessment, the associates’ hungry amusement.

“Count them out,” Belmont said.

The first stroke landed like a firecracker. Marty gasped, his whole body jerking. The paddle was old but the wood was dense, and Belmont swung it with the precision of a man who’d played competitively in his youth. The pain was sharp and immediate, blooming across his right cheek.

“One,” Marty gritted out.

The second came faster, lower, catching the tender spot where thigh met ass. “Two.”

By ten, his ass was on fire. By twenty, he was grunting with every impact, his fingers digging into the cushion. The associates murmured among themselves, commenting on the color rising in his skin, the way his legs trembled. Belmont was methodical, never rushing, letting each stroke land with full force before pulling back for the next.

“Twenty-five,” Marty panted. Sweat dripped down his forehead. “Halfway. I can do this.”

“You’re doing great,” Belmont said, and brought the paddle down again.

Thirty. Marty’s vision was blurring. His ass felt like it had been stung by a thousand bees, the skin swollen and hot. He could hear one of the associates unbuckling his belt—not to join in, just adjusting himself, but the sound made Marty’s stomach lurch.

Thirty-five. A sob tore out of his throat. He couldn’t help it. The pain was beyond anything he’d imagined, layer upon layer until every nerve was screaming.

Forty. Belmont paused. “You’re bleeding a little. Just a few spots. Should I stop?”

“No,” Marty snarled. “Keep going. I’m not giving you the satisfaction.”

“Oh, I’m already satisfied,” Belmont said. “This is just the encore.”

Forty-one. Forty-two. Forty-three. Marty’s legs buckled on forty-four, but he caught himself, locked his knees. Forty-five.

The paddle came down and something inside Marty snapped. His legs gave out completely and he slid off the sofa, collapsing onto the Persian rug in a heap of trembling limbs. His ass was a ruin of purple and red, a few thin lines of blood trickling down the backs of his thighs.

“Forty-five,” Belmont announced. “Not fifty.”

“No,” Marty whispered. “No, please. Give me the last five. I can take them.”

“The deal was fifty or you take my cock. You collapsed. You’re done.” Belmont set the paddle aside and began unbuckling his own belt. “Get him up.”

Two of the associates rose. They hauled Marty to his feet, then bent him over the back of the sofa, his chest pressed into the cushions, his ravaged ass presented high. Marty struggled weakly but his body was spent, muscles refusing to cooperate.

“Please,” he said. “At least use a condom.”

Belmont laughed, stepping up behind him. “A condom? That wasn’t part of the arrangement. You had your chance to negotiate before we started.” He spit into his palm, slicked himself roughly, and pressed the head of his cock against Marty’s hole. “Now you take what you’re given.”

The penetration was brutal. Belmont didn’t ease in—he shoved, hard and fast, tearing a scream from Marty’s throat. No lube, just spit and blood and force. Marty’s hands scrabbled at the leather, trying to find purchase, trying to escape, but the associates held him firm.

“Fuck,” Marty sobbed. “Fuck, stop, please—”

“Only when I’m done,” Belmont said, his voice maddeningly calm even as he drove deeper. “You wanted this trip. You said anything. This is anything.”

The associates were jeering now, offering commentary. One of them had pulled out his phone—not recording, Marty prayed, just checking something, but the casualness of it was its own kind of horror. Belmont fucked with steady, punishing rhythm, each thrust sending fresh agony through Marty’s abused body. The pain was different from the paddling—deeper, more intimate, a violation that went beyond physical.

“Please don’t come inside me,” Marty begged, his voice cracking. “Please, Belmont, please, I’ll do anything else—”

“You don’t have anything else to offer.” Belmont’s hands gripped Marty’s hips, fingers digging into the bruised flesh. “You’re just a hole now. A hole I paid for.”

The rhythm increased. Belmont’s breathing grew heavier, his thrusts more erratic. Marty could feel him swelling, could feel the inevitable building, and he wept openly, tears and snot running down his face, his whole body shaking.

“Almost there,” Belmont grunted. “Take it, you little shit. Take every drop.”

He came with a low groan, buried deep, his cock pulsing as he emptied himself inside Marty’s body. Marty felt it—hot, wet, foreign—and a fresh wave of nausea rolled through him. Belmont stayed there for a long moment, letting the sensation linger, before pulling out with a wet sound that made the associates chuckle.

Marty collapsed onto the sofa, unable to move, unable to think. His ass was upturned, exposed, and he could feel Belmont’s come leaking out of him, trickling down his thigh, mixing with the blood. He was crying quietly, the sobs hitching in his chest, his pride and his body equally shattered.

He heard Belmont cleaning himself with a handkerchief. Heard the zip of trousers. Then the soft flutter of paper landing on the cushion beside his head.

“Eight-thirty, LaGuardia, tomorrow morning,” Belmont said. “First class, as promised. Don’t be late.”

Footsteps crossed the room. The door opened, letting in a wash of jazz music and party chatter, then closed again. The associates followed, their laughter fading down the hallway.

Marty lay there for a long time. The fire crackled. The jazz played on somewhere far away. Eventually, he pushed himself up, wincing at the fire in his ass, and looked at the ticket. Tokyo. Tomorrow. His dream, paid for in pain and humiliation.

He limped to the bathroom, cleaned himself as best he could, and pulled his jeans back on with a hiss. Every movement was agony. But he was moving. That was the thing about Marty Supreme—he always kept moving.

At the door, he paused. The paddle was still on the floor where Belmont had dropped it. Marty picked it up, turned it over in his hands. Then he tucked it under his arm.

Souvenir, he thought. Or maybe evidence. Or maybe just a reminder that he’d survived.

He took the elevator down to the street, hailed a cab, and gave the driver his address—the shitty apartment in Queens where he’d been crashing. Tomorrow he’d be on a plane. Tomorrow he’d be in Tokyo. And when he stood on that podium with the gold medal around his neck, he’d send Belmont a photo.

No message. Just the photo.

Let the old bastard figure out what it meant.